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by OrionStarAblaze from Grand Prairie, TX

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Well, scottbee wanted something more upbeat... and this is the best I can do for now. Hopefully you can find the meaning through the title.

Heal me with some words
Can you hear them crying?

Shroud us with words
While they're out there dying

Drop words, not bombs
Is that a possibility?

Is one worse than the other?
Is this all a fallacy?

Like the individual, words are beautiful
But when grouped together cause distress
Forcing us to believe through duress

They see the sheep are gathering
Quickly, the trap is set
Fragile is the mind, how soon we all forget

So now I come to see
All it was meant to be
Was a line in history

Kill the feeling with the lie
Listen as the higher tries
Our simple need satisfied

Tell me more of your mistake
As I fall into the wake
Another meaning left to take

And as I walk this line
I will soon come to find
The words weigh heavy on our minds

Simplicity in a phrase
A population unfazed

Simplicity in a phrase
A population unfazed...

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ProudAmerican read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 3:08 PM

WOW that is very nice.
Well done.

OrionStarAblaze read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 3:38 PM

I appreciate it.

scottbee1948 read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 3:45 PM

John you are so talented.
Wish I could just reach through this computer and give you a big hug.
Of course I wouldn't want to embarrass you but since I have a great grandson just a little younger than you would make it alright.

OrionStarAblaze read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 3:47 PM

Thanks Bee... at least when blog writing fails me (as it seems to have lately,) I always have poetry to turn to, and even if just a few people appreciate it, the appreciation makes it all worth it.

Taco_Man read my blog
Sep 4, 2008 | 4:18 PM

Great! It is so true.

I thought it was about Joel Osteen. (i'm joking. don't get mad)

OrionStarAblaze read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 4:36 PM

LOL

fvsmith read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 5:19 PM

Very good John!
Yes! I understand it.

Bellafisk read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 7:15 PM

John this was excellent.

Don't ever stop.

illusionsssss read my blog
Sep 4, 2008 | 9:25 PM

Great job. I think it can apply to many things........That's all I will say.

Good luck to you.

OrionStarAblaze read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 9:27 PM

why are you so apprehensive on my blogs, ill?

illusionsssss read my blog
Sep 4, 2008 | 9:42 PM

I am not apprehensive, John. YOU remind me of MY kid, as I have told you before. My 18 year old kid is an angry young man with the potential to rock this universe! He is attending his first year of college this year.

You just don't seem to want me to comment, but sometimes I have to.

I wrote alot of poetry and took creative writing in high school, so sometimes you remind me of me. I wrote alot of "dark" carp at one point too.

It's strange watching you.....I guess. You remind me of me, and you remind me of my son. That is "weird".

illusionsssss read my blog
Sep 4, 2008 | 9:44 PM

P.S. Ever thought about being a psychologist or psychiatrist?

-just asking'

GUNRIGHTS read my blog view my photos
Sep 4, 2008 | 10:48 PM

Great job Orion (don't know you well enough to call you John).

You definitely have some talent.

scottbee1948 read my blog view my photos
Sep 5, 2008 | 9:11 AM

Congratulation John---You made the Front Page.

Great job.

OrionStarAblaze read my blog view my photos
Sep 5, 2008 | 1:23 PM

I write dark stuff not out of depression, but I can flow a little more when I write dark stuff.

I'm not "gothic" or whatever the adults call the out cast kids who seem to be going nowhere.

The human mind intrigues me greatly, but I don't know about being a shrink or anything like that. Observing behavior and such is good enough for me.

TexanInfidel read my blog view my photos
Sep 5, 2008 | 4:48 PM

I agree with ills on the psychologist/psychiatrist suggestion...

very good.

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